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I am the author of an upcoming YA Fairytale retelling series, an avid reader, and a movie watcher who has some experience working as a freelance proofreader and beta critique editor.


My love for storytelling is an essential part of who I am. I have channeled that love for stories into a career as a professional storyteller. I've launched my affordable manuscript evaluation critique services to help offer writers feedback to take their story from good to great.

I specialize in YA and MG fantasy or fairytale-inspired books. I am open to editing, critiquing, and narrating other genres such as children's books, MG, YA, NA, thrillers, and mysteries. For movies, plays, and shows, I specialize in fantasy, comedy, and historical fiction. No matter the genre, I am looking forward to helping you craft an incredible story for your audience.



Though, I do not critique stories with erotica, explicit sex, or abuse scenes in any genre.

 

Editing Services

Full Critique: up to 100,000 words

Helping you make your story stronger

I will provide a manuscript critique evaluation with in-line feedback tracked on the manuscript document, with an additional reader report page with customized feedback.


I will critique your story for: readability/flow, pacing/plot, character development, dialogue, structure of the story, plot holes/inconsistencies, story arc, storytelling technique, writer strengths/weaknesses, improvement opportunities and up to 10 specific questions from the writer that I will answer in an additional reader report

Price: $0.01 per word 

Partial Critique: up to 10,000 words

Helping you hook your audience right from the start

Get a manuscript critique evaluation with in-line feedback + the option for an additional page of customized feedback including up to 3 target questions about your story/writing process that I will answer for you.

Price: $150

What Kind Of Stories Do I Critique?

I specialize in Young Adult and Middle Grade fantasy and/or fairytale-inspired books/stories.


I am open to critiquing other genres within YA and MG as well as New Adult (but I don't critique spicy stories or those with abuse or sexual content.) I am also open to editing and critiquing Christian fiction and nonfiction works such as self-help or inspirational stories (like the books: Bamboozled by Jesus: How God Tricked Me Into the Life of My Dreams, When Warriors Talk, God Listens by Reshelle Matheny, and Becoming by Michelle Obama.)


Are you a screenwriter or a playwright who needs feedback? I would love to work with you too!

For movies, plays, and shows, I specialize in fantasy, comedy, and historical fiction. 

Though, remember: I do not critique stories with erotica, explicit sex, or abuse scenes in any genre for books or productions.

Sample My Style

I offer a ONE PAGE sample edit- which gives you the chance to see if you like my editing or manuscript evaluation style.

Price Info

PAYMENTS ARE ONLY ACCEPTED THROUGH PAYPAL & VENMO  (you may be charged additional tax.)

I require a nonrefundable 25% deposit at the time of booking. If you reschedule, I will need to know 30 days in advance in order for the deposit will transfer to the new date. If you do not give me a 30-day notice, your non-refundable 25% deposit will be forfeited. You will have to fill out the details form on my website to book a new spot for a critique.

Critique Delivery

Please expect your critique to be delivered within 2 to 3 weeks via email. If you have a longer manuscript (100k +) I will let you know if the delivery time will increase to 4 to 6 weeks.

 

Ready To Move Forward?

I offer affordable critique packages for the writing community and keep my editorial rates in line with industry standards.

If you are ready to work with me, please FOLLOW THE INSTRUCTIONS BELOW. I will follow up within 1-2 days via email.

CLICK ON THE BUTTON BELOW & SEND THE FOLLOWING DETAILS...

  1. Your name (or pen name)

  2. Your story's genre

  3. Your story type: book, film, show, etc

  4. Your story's word count

  5. A 1-3 sentence summary or blurb about your story

  6. Mention which package you want: Partial Or Full Critique

  7. Also, mention if you would like a SAMPLE ONE PAGE CRITIQUE

  8. Include whether you will pay with VENMO or PAYPAL 

 

What Writers Are Saying About My Services

 

"The work performed was in a timely and efficient manner. I will definitely used this service again."

Reshelle Matheny, @warriors_talk