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Reshelle Matheny, @warriors_talk

Manuscript Critique

Helping you make your story stronger and hook your audience right from the start!

I will provide a manuscript critique evaluation with in-line feedback tracked on the document, and an additional reader report page with customized feedback.

I will critique your story for: readability/flow, pacing/plot, character development, dialogue, structure of the story, plot holes/inconsistencies, story arc, storytelling technique, writer strengths/weaknesses, improvement opportunities and up to 5 specific questions/concerns from you (the writer) that I will answer/address in an additional reader report

Price: $250 for 25,000 words (any additional words will be charged at $0.01 per word over 25,000.)

What Kind Of Stories Do I Critique?

I specialize in Young Adult and Middle Grade fantasy and/or fairytale-inspired books/stories.

I am open to critiquing other genres within YA and MG as well as New Adult (but I don't critique spicy stories or those with abuse or sexual content.) I am also open to editing and critiquing Christian fiction and nonfiction works such as self-help or inspirational stories (like the books: Bamboozled by Jesus: How God Tricked Me Into the Life of My Dreams, When Warriors Talk, God Listens by Reshelle Matheny, and Becoming by Michelle Obama.)

Are you a screenwriter or a playwright who needs feedback? I would love to work with you too!

For movies, plays, and shows, I specialize in fantasy, comedy, and historical fiction. 

Though, remember: I do not critique stories with erotica, explicit sex, or abuse scenes in any genre for books or productions.

Sample My Style

If you’re interested in a manuscript critique, I’d be happy to provide a few examples of previous manuscript critiques I've done for other writers. Then, you can preview the style of in-line feedback I provide and check that it’s the right fit for you.

Price Info

PAYMENTS ARE ONLY ACCEPTED THROUGH PAYPAL & VENMO  (you may be charged additional tax.)

I require a nonrefundable 25% deposit at the time of booking. If you reschedule, I will need to know 30 days in advance in order for the deposit will transfer to the new date. If you do not give me a 30-day notice, your non-refundable 25% deposit will be forfeited. You will have to fill out the details form on my website to book a new spot for a critique.

Critique Delivery

Please expect your critique to be delivered within 1 to 2 weeks via email. I will let you know if the delivery time will increase for any reason (like a higher word count, etc.)


Want To Submit Your Story For A Critique?

I'll review your submission and be in touch in 1-2 days with the offer of previewing my previous critiques and payment info.

Thanks for submitting!

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